Thursday, March 10, 2011


See what I did there?

Anyway, re-work of the preliminary breakdown.

I'm happier with this, although there are some tweaks I'll clean up as I move to full-size rough.

What'cha think?


  1. Rassin' frassin' Blogger crap software. Lost my original comment. Bah.


    YES! Much better - great shot of Bats reacting, surprised but ready. Lots of possibilities for lighting coolness with the signal in the background. Diggin' it.

    Couple of crits:

    a) Does Bats have claws or something? Not sure I like it - probably just a typical nerdrage quibble.
    2) Like to see something more dramatic with the cape - maybe flapping up out of the neckline or shredded with bullet holes or something?

    Lookin' sharp!

  2. He's often depicted with clawed gloves when he's getting ready for combat, and often even when just using the Batcomputer.

    Especially in animated versions, for some reason. Felt less boring to me. :D

  3. Dude that rules! But I agree about the cape.i would make it come out towards the left like he's moving back and the cape is towards us with bullet holes from the tommy gun in the downed gordon.and the inset panel! So great! Can't wait to see it!